Friday, October 25, 2019
Elevator Pitch No. 2 - 17A
1) Elevator Pitch #2 Video: https://youtu.be/tJODSDb3ER8
2) The two people who commented on my original elevator pitch provided positive feedback and even pointed a great selling point. I never had in mind the safety aspect of owning and running a gym, which is an extremely important factor to include. Thanks to the feedback, I can provide another value to my future customers. I believe my concept is still a profitable business idea, and the comments reinforce it. My delivery was well received, which made me feel confident about this new elevator pitch.
3) I added that having instructional videos in each station of the gym would not only help the member know exactly what moves they should be performing, but also keep them safe as well. Gym and safety go hand in hand, and I'm happy it was pointed out in the feedback received. Also, I never mentioned the price for the membership, which should've been included in the first elevator pitch.
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Hi,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your elevator pitch! I liked this one a lot more than the first one! You made so many improvements in your pitch. I really liked the speed you talked at and tone of voice you used. It made it really easy to understand what it is that you were trying to sell. The safety and the price were two important things that you added in this new pitch and I'm glad you did. Keep up the great work.
Hi Fiorella,
ReplyDeleteYou seemed much more comfortable in the elevator pitch than the first one. I found that this one sounded more conversational and less rehearsed. I could tell that you had more confidence this time around. In adding a price for the gym membership, you can give who you're talking to a better understanding of what you are offering. Great job improving your elevator pitch!
Hi Fiorella,
ReplyDeleteGood job on this. You sound very laid back, but interesting, and your idea is a good one. You should really drive home the problem, so that the solution seems more glamorous, especially if you're selling something that everyone wants (everyone wants to be in shape). One other note is your hands are a little distracting as you talk. Make sure you are using your hands only with meaningful gestures, not every statement your saying. Other than that, great job.